Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Walking under a wide-brimmed hat

Sounds/
Feet/the trip of
Birds/the whispering
Wings/how close

2 comments:

  1. They are very lovely poems. I particularly like The Black Taxi with its interest in language and dialect and syncopated rhythm. Hello,

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  2. Thanks for being my first visitor and for your comments Paul. I had a quick look around gingatao.com and found lots of interest. I am writing a lot of 'proseypoemthingies' myself at the moment and so really enjoyed your Man Loathing... Among others. And the Burning Piano image! Cheers, Lizz

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